Zayru13's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Boss Rush Apocalypse]

I had an absolute blast playing this game. You did a fantastic job with it. It's rather simple but gets increasingly difficult for the player without irritating the player but instead wanting them to play "one more time" each time they beat their last score. The only recommendation that I really have is some background music. Small simple looping music about 30 seconds long or so from a community source would work, but it's your choice. I did a Let's Play of it here: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xOQH_JEVdTU. I can't wait to see more of your work, you did a great job, especially in just 3 days.

[The One Fork Restaurant DX]

Great game. Very simple yet still complex as time moves on. You did a really good job. The sound fits perfectly in the background, the complexity slowly increases throughout and the player is able to understand it easily. I really enjoyed it. I did a Let's Play of it with more of a review here: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3Rc3W8HpXIE. Keep up the great work.

drludos responds:

Woaw, thanks for this great Let's Play video, very funny to watch! I'm glad you enjoyed the game :)

[Chrono Ninja: Trickster Unleashed]

This was a pretty fun game I have to say. It wasn't long or majorly intense but I think it would make a really fun phone app or time wasting game online like it is, so I found it really fun. I also loved the art, I read that it was from a free bundle or meant to be used with prototypes but I don't care, the little guy you play as is adorable, except when it turned into hell when I went into the slow time stuff... that got weird but still fun. I did a Let's Play of it here: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TH97fQoAjrE.

The only real suggestions I have is to add more levels and a few more mechanics in each level to make them unique. Maybe have the player go through each level and reach a certain score to progress to the next one (with the option to stay in that one for as long as they want till they died) and then in the next level introduce a new mechanic and enemies. Besides that I think it's a good game that could be turned into a great one. Keep up the good work.

[Crazy Bounce Punks]

I think this is a solid start to the game if you plan on continuing it or making another one someday. It is short and repetitive but a couple simple things would keep the player playing more. A clock somewhere to show how long you lasted or a score would help as well. An ability to pick up some health or something could also work with the clock to try to last longer. I like the message at the end though. I did a short Let's Play of it here: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7Em1DY8CW_U with more of a review while playing it. I do like the overall idea and think it could be a good game going forward but that is entirely up to you. Keep up the good work though.

BrindieGuy responds:

WHOA. I did not expect this. Really. I mean, my simple game have a video review in yt? Well, thanks for that. is the first time it happens. I feel flattered :)
A score was planned but I cut because of the competition theme. Why a score if you ,necessarily, will lose and not achieve your goal? that's what I thought. I also had less than a week to make the game. So, I just wanted to focus on the message. But now after good comments I think I'll make a new one. with all the features that a game should have. just give me some time because I had some other plans in mind. Ah, the easter egg It is the title screen. you can move your character and "interact" with the word "bounce". Also if you move to "click here to start" the game starts automatically. It is no big deal but it's something.
Thank you for your comment.

[Deception]

A very good game for your first ever and for the game type, it's solid as well. The only thing that I can really say to improve it is to have some sort of clue, even a very tiny one, to help the player know what to do in certain situations. In the level where you have to fall at a certain spot I only found it on accident after a while of not knowing what to do. I think overall it's a great game though. I did a Let's Play of it here: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=K1VMDYs0NkI , had to give up at a certain point but still had fun. Keep up the good work.

[THERE IS NO GAME]

I can't give more than 5 stars which is terrible, I love this game. You did an amazing job. There is nothing that needs improvement on this game at all. I did a Let's Play of it here: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=H1k6ftg17wc and had a blast playing it. Truly keep up the great work.

[FallAloneFallFar 2]

For what it is, I liked this game. It was simple while still being a solid gameplay experience. A few comments on it that might make it better in my opinion, which obviously is not the same as everyone's.
1. The red blocks are nice but I think maybe something like birds or something that you might come across in the sky might make it cosmetically a little better.
2. The hit markers seem to be a little off at times, I sometimes felt that I wasn't close enough to get hit but still did. That could just be me being stupid.
Besides that I enjoyed it. I love the little character and how they move when you go left or right, the scoring mechanism and the overall gameplay and idea. I did a Let's Play of it here: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=enztcRKaeFU and did a bit more of a review on it. Keep up the good work.

[Do Not Trust This Game]

I am a big fan of this game after playing it for a bit. It's challenging without making the player want to go outside and hurt someone within the first two minutes. I didn't get too far in my first play but am gonna keep coming back to this, I do enjoy it. Only bug I found was sometimes I could have the player looking back while running forward. I did a Let's Play of it here: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rMseJU6E5Ls. Keep it up, really enjoyed it, especially the clouds.

HCursino responds:

My game has a Let's Play video :0

That is... AWESOME!!!!!!

DUDE! I'm honored, thank you

[90 second basketball]

Great start to the game. There are some bugs to work on, ball sometimes goes through hoop but doesn't count, part of the title in the start screen is too high, clicking play again sometimes causes an error and some other small stuff. Generally a solid start to the game and I like it. Maybe also add more choices in time for the game or a choice to play it without the line and get more points and stuff like that. I did a video of playing it here: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wo_UmIebcic. Overall I enjoyed the game, just some stuff to work on.

[Kill the Plumber]

I honestly had a blast playing this game. Addicting and increasingly challenging. I really can't think of anything to improve on in this game, I think you did a truly amazing job on this. I did a gameplay video here: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MU7KhMP-DJs reviewing it more. Honestly, great job and I recommend making more like this.

keybol responds:

thank you! i watched your video, funny :D