Zayru13's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Horror House]

I have to say that it is a great start to something much better. For a short little side-scrolling horror game, it is solid, but I think you could make it much better by doing more with it. Having a longer game with more levels, a progressing story, and a change in music more. But again, for what it was, I think you did a great job, I just think you could turn it into a really solid game by continuing it. I did a small let's play here: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sYNH_vDiU4Y. Keep up the great work.

Oh, I found one bug, if you hold down on the W key for long enough, you will just keep bouncing even after letting go and pressing it again, small little thing that is fixed by dying it seems.

BusinessCatStudio responds:

Wow you even made a video :O Thank you very much but unfortunately i lost all my game files so i can't update it :(

[Hatchet Harry]

This game is so simple yet so hysterical I kept coming back to it. I first planned on doing a video review on youtube not expecting anything and five minutes in I broke inside and stopped questioning what was happening. I love it. Check out the video if you want here: https://www.youtube.com/my_videos?o=U and keep up the work. Loved it so much. Only thing I'd recommend is some customization for room, people, 'object', etc. Besides that I love it.

JokerDenFromMR responds:

Thanks a lot but link is incorrect. Can you send me right link? I really want to see your letsplay.

[Game.Init()]

Once again great job. As a Game Designer/ Programmer myself I really enjoyed the overall story. Would be hysterical if something like that happened while making a game. The only real problem was the jump key occasionally didn't respond correctly. Once again I did a short Let's Play of it here: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6eayMPtUf88. You did a great job with this one.

keybol responds:

wow thanks a lot! watching it now

[Crazy Alien Snake]

Fun, short and replayable with good music and sounds. I really like the highscore as well, not just the ability to compare but also the look of it. Actually I liked the look of it all in general. I did a Let's Play of it here: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=p2uV0NbPfiQ with a little more of a review.

The only problem I had was I didn't know what the items did for a little while and coiled myself up at the end. Simple fix for the items is a little instruction or "how to" menu at the start showing what they are used for and for the coiling a "kill self" or "reverse" mechanic could work. I found it funny since I was large and killed instantly but you could get stuck without dying for a while. Overall I loved it, keep up the great work.

bioludus responds:

Hey Man! Huge thanks for this warm post! And really glad that game made you laugh!!

[The One Fork Restaurant DX]

Great game. Very simple yet still complex as time moves on. You did a really good job. The sound fits perfectly in the background, the complexity slowly increases throughout and the player is able to understand it easily. I really enjoyed it. I did a Let's Play of it with more of a review here: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3Rc3W8HpXIE. Keep up the great work.

drludos responds:

Woaw, thanks for this great Let's Play video, very funny to watch! I'm glad you enjoyed the game :)

[Crazy Bounce Punks]

I think this is a solid start to the game if you plan on continuing it or making another one someday. It is short and repetitive but a couple simple things would keep the player playing more. A clock somewhere to show how long you lasted or a score would help as well. An ability to pick up some health or something could also work with the clock to try to last longer. I like the message at the end though. I did a short Let's Play of it here: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7Em1DY8CW_U with more of a review while playing it. I do like the overall idea and think it could be a good game going forward but that is entirely up to you. Keep up the good work though.

BrindieGuy responds:

WHOA. I did not expect this. Really. I mean, my simple game have a video review in yt? Well, thanks for that. is the first time it happens. I feel flattered :)
A score was planned but I cut because of the competition theme. Why a score if you ,necessarily, will lose and not achieve your goal? that's what I thought. I also had less than a week to make the game. So, I just wanted to focus on the message. But now after good comments I think I'll make a new one. with all the features that a game should have. just give me some time because I had some other plans in mind. Ah, the easter egg It is the title screen. you can move your character and "interact" with the word "bounce". Also if you move to "click here to start" the game starts automatically. It is no big deal but it's something.
Thank you for your comment.

[Do Not Trust This Game]

I am a big fan of this game after playing it for a bit. It's challenging without making the player want to go outside and hurt someone within the first two minutes. I didn't get too far in my first play but am gonna keep coming back to this, I do enjoy it. Only bug I found was sometimes I could have the player looking back while running forward. I did a Let's Play of it here: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rMseJU6E5Ls. Keep it up, really enjoyed it, especially the clouds.

HCursino responds:

My game has a Let's Play video :0

That is... AWESOME!!!!!!

DUDE! I'm honored, thank you

[Kill the Plumber]

I honestly had a blast playing this game. Addicting and increasingly challenging. I really can't think of anything to improve on in this game, I think you did a truly amazing job on this. I did a gameplay video here: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MU7KhMP-DJs reviewing it more. Honestly, great job and I recommend making more like this.

keybol responds:

thank you! i watched your video, funny :D